Complementation of multiple sources of feedback in EFL learners' writing

被引:17
作者
Niu, Ruiying [1 ]
Shan, Peiwen [2 ]
You, Xiaoye [3 ]
机构
[1] Guangdong Univ Foreign Studies, Ctr Linguist & Appl Linguist, 2 Baiyun Ave North, Guangzhou 510420, Peoples R China
[2] Huangpu Middle Sch, 1 Xinliu West Rd, Zhongshan 528429, Peoples R China
[3] Penn State Univ, Dept English, 410 Burrowes Bldg, University Pk, PA 16802 USA
关键词
EFL writing; Complementation of feedback sources; Feedback point; Feedback area; Feedback strategy; Feedback uptake; PEER FEEDBACK; TEACHER; STUDENTS;
D O I
10.1016/j.asw.2021.100549
中图分类号
G40 [教育学];
学科分类号
040101 ; 120403 ;
摘要
As L2 writers receive diverse sources of feedback in their writing process, it is important to understand how these sources complement one another. The present study compared Chinese teacher feedback, Chinese peer feedback, and American student feedback provided on the same drafts of 17 Chinese EFL students' film reviews. The three sources were found to have complemented in feedback points, areas, and strategies. Specifically, all three sources provided high rates of non-overlapped feedback points and more local and form-focused feedback. Further, the teacher provided the most form-focused local feedback and used an indirect feedback strategy most frequently. In contrast, American students and Chinese peers focused more on meaningoriented local feedback and used a direct feedback strategy more frequently. Mediated by student writers' contrastive perceptions of the three feedback sources and feedback quality, American student feedback led to the highest rates of successful uptake, manifesting the superiority of cross-cultural feedback in quality, uptake, and student perceptions. This paper concludes by drawing pedagogical implications and suggesting future directions for exploring the complementation of feedback sources.
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